This is for all of your writings, songs, pictures or however else you feel like expressing yourself. Have at it!
godgivemestrength
Posts: 12 Joined: Sun Mar 28, 2004 3:46 pm
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by godgivemestrength » Sun Mar 28, 2004 6:01 pm
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godgivemestrength on Tue Mar 30, 2004 4:09 pm, edited 2 times in total.
"some say that all you need to money to be free from what is poor, well that's the lie of looking up from somewhere down"
selfmademug
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by selfmademug » Sun Mar 28, 2004 8:09 pm
Much better, thank you, than what you first posted. I'm not into censorship, and would never have asked you to rescind your post, but I don't think offensive limericks were really the point of this section.
Much About Much
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Location: Middletown
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by Much About Much » Thu Apr 01, 2004 7:22 pm
I liked it better the first way. Or the second. The third is confusing, though it has a lovely symmetry and Basho-like austerity.