chorus with verses coming

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chorus with verses coming

Postby noiseradio » Tue Dec 23, 2003 1:16 am

You're always running round
Forever trying to please me
A million miles an hour
So fast you never see me.

I don't need anything from you
Your gifts do nothing for me
Stop trying so hard to prove your love
And Honey just adore me.

I want to be your oxygen
I'm all you need to breathe
I want to be your nicotine
So fill your lungs with me
I want to be your favorite color
A shade that's never been
I want to be your break of dawn
And make the sun look dim
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Postby mood swung » Wed Dec 24, 2003 12:43 pm

well?

sounds good, btw.
Like me, the "g" is silent.

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Postby noiseradio » Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:57 pm

Thanks. Been travelling and haven't had time to work on it. But I'm going to sit down with my guitarist tomorrow and see what we can do.
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