am i romantic or creepy?

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costellopunk
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am i romantic or creepy?

Postby costellopunk » Fri Aug 29, 2003 4:08 am

let's sit here in the stillness
and enjoy it
turn off the light
and sit on the bed

don't lay down
just sit and listen

quiet

now i'm going to touch
your neck
and all you will here
is your hair rustling

quiet

now my hands are moving
down your back
to your hips

i'm going to put my chin
on your shoulder

i'm going to put my arms
around your stomach

this is how i memorize you

let me see your face
with my hands
so i can find you
in the dark

let me run my hands
all over you

keep me from getting lost

lay down
and hold onto me
so i don't fall

though
i think i already have
-it takes a long time but god dies too/but not before he sticks it to you-

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A rope leash
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Another person

Postby A rope leash » Fri Aug 29, 2003 7:10 am

Do you think that my pants are too tight? Do you think that I'm creepy?

Do you think that I creep through the night, and sleep in phone booth?

Do you think that I dream though the night of holding you near me?

- Frank Zappa

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sulkygirl
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Postby sulkygirl » Sat Aug 30, 2003 2:26 am

Actually, I find it very romantic, and nicely edgy.

Not you, rope...was referring to C-Punk's prose.
"Love can be stranger than fiction..."

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miss buenos aires
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Postby miss buenos aires » Tue Sep 02, 2003 9:38 am

I thought it was sexy.

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so lacklustre
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Postby so lacklustre » Tue Sep 02, 2003 9:53 am

verging on erotica?
signed with love and vicious kisses

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tokyo vogue
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Postby tokyo vogue » Tue Sep 02, 2003 8:52 pm

creepy can be romantic, in an odd way.

and yes, sexy poem.
if we can rock together, why can't we walk together?


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