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mood swung
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As Yet Untitled

Postby mood swung » Wed Aug 06, 2003 11:38 am

As Yet Untitled


Rocks don't age.
They weather.
Hot rain rivers in summer,
Cold snow petals in winter.
A monolith on the surface.
A mystery beneath.


We wrinkle.
Gravity grabs us.
Tears flow down,
bubbles of laughter float up.
Our lives take shape
as our bodies disintegrate.

If we are stones in the river of life
then we are tumbled perfection.
smoothed by the flow of the water
polished against each other.
Not looking back.
Only forward.





thanks for reading this!
Like me, the "g" is silent.

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Postby noiseradio » Wed Aug 06, 2003 12:04 pm

Thanks for writing it!
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--William Shakespeare

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Postby Gillibeanz » Wed Aug 06, 2003 2:10 pm

Very nice Mood. I love poems which compare things....more!! :D
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Postby bambooneedle » Wed Aug 06, 2003 3:52 pm

I like it Moodster.

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Kinda flat

Postby A rope leash » Wed Aug 06, 2003 8:17 pm

I want to be that rock, you know, kinda flat, kinda smooth...that you pick up and skip across the surface...

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Postby LessThanZero » Mon Aug 18, 2003 7:34 pm

I often feel like I'm being skipped across the river of life Rope. :D
Loving this board since before When I Was Cruel.

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Postby sulkygirl » Fri Aug 29, 2003 2:21 am

Sorry, my bad. See next post.
Last edited by sulkygirl on Fri Aug 29, 2003 2:27 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: As Yet Untitled

Postby sulkygirl » Fri Aug 29, 2003 2:26 am

Mood!

Quite lovely.

mood swung wrote:As Yet Untitled

We wrinkle.
Gravity grabs us.
Tears flow down,
bubbles of laughter float up.
Our lives take shape
as our bodies disintegrate.


Sort of like, "I finally got my shit together; now, my body's falling apart!"

But better expressed.

Hell, who needs a title?

8)
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