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pip_52
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Post by pip_52 »

whiskey drunk and
guilty sad
make me laugh or make me numb
just so I wont have to
cry
orthinkorfeelorbreatheorsigh

and everything will be okay
or so we say we say we say

the things that we dont ever say
or so we say we say we say

and everything will be okay
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mood swung
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Post by mood swung »

I like the run-ons and repetitions - gives it a manic edge. good poem, pip.
Like me, the "g" is silent.
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