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We Say

Postby pip_52 » Mon Feb 07, 2005 12:35 pm

whiskey drunk and
guilty sad
make me laugh or make me numb
just so I wont have to

and everything will be okay
or so we say we say we say

the things that we dont ever say
or so we say we say we say

and everything will be okay

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Postby mood swung » Fri Mar 04, 2005 12:31 pm

I like the run-ons and repetitions - gives it a manic edge. good poem, pip.
Like me, the "g" is silent.

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