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Tim(e)
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Construct-a-lyric...

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The following are a few lines I had jotted down a few months ago and can no longer recall what they were in relation to (although I have a feeling it may have something to do with the current political climate and our Prime Minister's penchant for crawling up one GWB's anal cavity).

Please feel free to add to this as you see fit - maybe it can become a community project?

All the suckers taking sucour
from lord and lady muck
are, just asking for what they're bound to receive.
While the blow-ins and the blowhards,
and sundry premature dotards
are just looking for a reason to believe.
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I'm not one for line breaks, but I tried. Sorry if I completely ruined it, I wanted to add though. Two lines is all I can afford tonight. :wink: I figured it was a good transition for anyone to follow up on.



All the suckers taking sucour
from lord and lady muck
are, just asking for what they're bound to receive.
While the blow-ins and the blowhards,
and sundry premature dotards
are just looking for a reason to believe.
To the land of grass, with balls of brass
a Jokester jogs a limp as his punchline
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My alternate version...

All the suckers taking sucour
from lord and lady muck
are, just asking for what they're bound to receive.
While the blow-ins and the blowhards,
and sundry premature dotards
are just looking for a reason to believe.
To the land of grass, with balls of brass
a Jokester jogs a limp as his punchline
Busy bodies
Very busy
Getting nowhere
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Post by wehitandrun »

I really wish this gathered contributors. Such a great idea.
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