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tokyo vogue
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Postby tokyo vogue » Fri Oct 17, 2003 11:19 pm

your hands speak so,
so eloquently,
cascading and crushing on me
like you know,
just know,
that waterfalls ain't got nothing on you.

and they don't.

brush and fall, hair in eyes,
and the stutterstutterstutter
of breath,
and that little piece of lip
caught between your teeth,
tugging and clenching.

tongue slides in, just,
(just so)
curved and
pulling apart.

arching above in perfect
symmetry,
and your hands,
shouting aloud:
"let me,
let me take you <i>down.</i>"
if we can rock together, why can't we walk together?

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LessThanZero
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Postby LessThanZero » Fri Oct 17, 2003 11:34 pm

Is this about sex, or am I just dirty?
Loving this board since before When I Was Cruel.

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spooky girlfriend
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Postby spooky girlfriend » Sat Oct 18, 2003 11:32 am

You're just dirty, LTZ. :o

Okay, maybe it's about sex. Probably. Most likely.

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Postby tokyo vogue » Sat Oct 18, 2003 7:31 pm

...what else would it be about?
if we can rock together, why can't we walk together?

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Postby spooky girlfriend » Sat Oct 18, 2003 7:39 pm

Ssshhh, tokyo. Let LTZ just think he's dirty! :)

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Postby mood swung » Sun Oct 19, 2003 9:16 am

very very nice. 'the stutterstutterstutter of breath'--excellent.
Like me, the "g" is silent.


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